Path of Destruction: Ages Before Myst

[Naigahsehn]

Hey guys. I'm currently working on a new fan-based story called Path of Destruction:Ages Before Myst. I was hoping to have it done sometime within the near future (a month or two, perhaps). It's about Sirrus and Achenars' childhood and how they become the greedy, evil-hearted men we know them as today(aswell as how Gehn became a dictator over the Rivenese, and how and the Stranger recieves the Myst linking book here on Earth {Tomahna}). Anyway, I just wanted to know if any of you would like to read it when it's finished. I want some critisizim (hopefully not too much). I'll keep you posted on it's progress, okay.

Caio

[Fallstar]

Sounds interesting! Yes, please post (in the MRED forum) when you have a chapter to share!

[Naigahsehn]

K. don't worry, i will

[Teroglahn]

I like the idea - I'm looking forward to it.

[Naigahsehn]

Sofar, it's going along at a faster pace then I first expected.

I've written the part about their younger days when they weren't so evil; I am now going on to describing Gehn and how he's making out in Riven as their new Leader, and describing how Sirrus and Achenar are destroying the lives of the inhabitants of their fathers' Ages.

[Naigahsehn]

I added what I have made so far.

Hope you enjoy

Remember, please critisize (not to much, though, but enough)

p.s: It's in the Library (Mred)

This post has been edited by Naigahsehn: Jun 29 2006, 05:30 PM

[Naigahsehn]

Oh, I have another story on the go as well-it's called Hope. I'll tell you more about it later

[lego_addict]

Um, I wasn't able to post at the story itself, so I'll post here.

I really like it, but I think it needs more dialouge.

That is really my only suggestion, great work

[Naigahsehn]

Thanks, lego_addict. I've been meaning to add more dialogue, but I haven't got around to doing so just yet. But I will when I can